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Note: I haven’t written in, like, ages. Bet my English’s all rusty.
Genre : AU "drabble" (not 100 words actually)
Word Count : about 161
Disclaimer: Ennis and Jack were not created by me, but by Annie E. Proulx. No infringements or disrespects intended.


Calm before the storm~

“What’cha lookin’ at?”

Ennis is frowing, standing still and straight when Jack joins him.
He’s looking north and Jack stops beside him, curious, although somewhat dishevelled and still not fully awake. He tries to stifle a yawn withouth really succeeding.
On his right, Ennis snorts.

“Storm’s comin’,” he says.

Terse as usual.

Jack looks northwards where Ennis’s been looking, at the clouds that are already gathering, growing darker and thicker by the minute.

“Hmm,” he says, sliding both hands deep in his jeans pockets. Sudden and brief, a thunder growls in the distance. “It’s gonna be terrible, campin’ in this weather.”

Ennis chews on his lower lip. He doesn’t answer.

“Guess we’re goin’ tomorrow.” Two hands sneak around Ennis’s waist as Jack leans on his back, pushing Ennis lightly against the porch rail to talk straight into his ear, his voice a low rumble like the thunder growling north. “Come back inside.”



Summer rain storm over the Wyoming plains- Mark Lewis

Date: 2010-10-17 10:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bagel1.livejournal.com
Oh, love the atmosphere of this piece, sweetie:)

This whole section is simply wonderful, and the picture makes it all the more palpable:)

Hmm,” he says, sliding both hands deep in his jeans pockets. Sudden and brief, a thunder growls in the distance. “It’s goinna be terrible, campin’ in this weather.”

Ennis chews on his lower lip. He doesn’t answer.

“Guess we’re goin’ tomorrow.” Two hands sneak around Ennis’s waist as Jack leans on his back, pushing Ennis lightly against the porch rail to talk straight into his ear, his voice a low rumble like the thunder growling north. “Come back inside.”


Wish I could write in another language:) Well done, just lovely:)

Hugs

Joanne XXX

Date: 2010-10-18 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bowl-of-glow.livejournal.com
Thanks honey ♥

Have a good day (night?)

B.

Your English is just fine!

Date: 2010-10-17 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sjmarv.livejournal.com
Hi, I'm pretty new to BBS, so you don't know me. This drabble is lovely, and so is the pic. Just when I thought they'd be taking down the tent, packing up and leaving early on on of their camping trips, you throw in the bit about the porch railing and my mind wanders off onto a totally different life for them. Thanks for that happier glimpse than canon ever supplies.

Susan

Date: 2010-10-18 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bowl-of-glow.livejournal.com
Welcome to the fandom!

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it! :)

*hugs*

B.

Date: 2010-10-17 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparklesdani.livejournal.com
This was beautiful! At first, it sounded like they were camping up at Brokeback, but then you mentioned the porch and it changed everything. I loved it. And your English is perfect! <3

Date: 2010-10-18 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bowl-of-glow.livejournal.com
Thanks for your comment :)

(...if you were born in '92 then you're just one year younger than me... mmm, and I used to be one of the youngest around here, I'm getting old! *LOL*)

*hugs!*

B.

Date: 2010-10-18 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparklesdani.livejournal.com
Yeah, you're ancient if you're a year older than me! LOL! *hugs back*
Dani

sweet

Date: 2010-10-18 12:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joetheone.livejournal.com
love the feeling of a good storm snuggling up with the one you love just feeling it. Joe

Date: 2010-10-18 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bowl-of-glow.livejournal.com
Thanks Joe :)
I'm happy you liked it!

*hugs*

B.

Date: 2010-10-18 06:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roby100.livejournal.com
Thanks for the "porch rail" and "come inside", the image of their sweet life is perfect.
A big hug
R.

Date: 2010-10-18 06:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bowl-of-glow.livejournal.com
Grazie cara ♥

Un bacio :)

B.

Date: 2010-10-20 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gwylliondream.livejournal.com
That was PERFECT G! Hey, I borrowed your icon the last time I saw it, because not only is it pretty, but it reminds me of you!

XO
Donna

Date: 2010-10-20 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bowl-of-glow.livejournal.com
Aww that's sweet of you :)
Borrow away! *lol*

Glad you liked this- sorry I'm not much around, Russian's hard *sigh* but I like school anyway! :)

Hope you're well, thanks for dropping a line ♥ it always makes me happy

Much love!

B xoxo

Date: 2010-10-21 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jacks-key.livejournal.com
Oooh, I really liked this. You really captured the atmosphere of that picture. :)

Date: 2010-11-11 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bowl-of-glow.livejournal.com
Thanks... a bit late *lol*

*hugs*

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