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bowl_of_glowWarnings: dead!Jack
"Quem mihi dabis qui intellegat se cotidie mori?”
Sheol~
There had been no floating, there had been no voices, there had been no light.
It was all painfully concrete, and a very much lonely experience.
There had been hurt, hurt and more hurt, more than he would ever believe it could even exist as the blows came faster and harder, until his whole body simply stopped fighting that futile battle and surrendered.
Let be, let be.
No more pain, no more feelings, his numb soul struggling to get free.
Let be, let be.
And maybe it was just the final stage-
tire irons, at least a quicker way to die
so tired of slowly dying inside,
every damn day
every rejection he got-
maybe it was better that way- once for all, and never again.
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Date: 2009-11-27 12:21 am (UTC)This was lovely. I definitely have no problem with Dead!Jack when it is as poignant as you have made it. Sad, that it was better for the pain to finally end for him after so many years of slow suffering.
A big hug to you sweetie-pie!
XO
Donna
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Date: 2009-11-27 08:12 pm (UTC)LOL! You crack me up, girl. :)
Thanks for commenting, and a BIG hug to you too hon!
xxx
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Date: 2009-11-27 03:57 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-11-27 08:13 pm (UTC)A big hug!!
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Date: 2009-11-27 02:39 pm (UTC)Molto triste, certo, ma il tuo stile poetico e la tua introspezione psicologica sono perfette.
Grazie,
Un bacione
Paola
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Date: 2009-11-27 08:16 pm (UTC)Mi piaceva la parola 'Sheol', l'ho trovata in giro, è una parola ebraica- diceva "the destination of both the righteous and the unrighteous dead"... Nè paradiso nè inferno.
Grazie mille x il commento.
Spero tu stia bene! ♥
Un grosso bacio!
xxx
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Date: 2009-11-27 09:22 pm (UTC)Grazie, come sempre.
♥
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Date: 2009-11-27 08:56 pm (UTC)Your writing is a gem, darlin', delicate and still real powerful. Please, don't ever stop writing.
Thank you so much for this.
LOVE YOU!!
Tammy.
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Date: 2009-11-27 09:01 pm (UTC)SOOO good to see you here. I have missed you!!
I know how you feel about reading sad stuff, just wanted to tell you that you don’t have to read what I write if you don’t feel like it. Not that I don’t love your comments, lol!
But you know what I mean- don’t like to break your heart, uh. ♥
Hope you are ok honey, you are in my thoughts, always.
A BIG kiss!!
*muak!*
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Date: 2009-11-28 12:35 pm (UTC)Oh Jack, oh little darlin'...**sobs**
I love you, Baby B.
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Date: 2009-11-27 11:09 pm (UTC)I didn't know you were getting back on here....
I hope some things are better for you..
I've missed ya and IT'S GREAT TO SEE YOU BACK! =D
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Date: 2009-11-28 12:37 pm (UTC)It's SO good to "see" you again!!! How are you? Hope everything is ok.
I've been away from here these last months, but now I am trying to start reading and commenting again. I missed you too.
Big hugs, babe!!!
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Date: 2009-11-28 08:30 pm (UTC)Yeah, I hope the time away was good for you... :)
*Hugs, hugs and MORE hugs* =D
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Date: 2009-11-27 11:07 pm (UTC)Hope you had a nice thanksgiving yesterday if you celebrate... :)
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Date: 2009-11-27 11:37 pm (UTC)XOXO
Hluv
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Date: 2009-11-28 02:36 pm (UTC)"so tired of slowly dying inside"
So beautifully written. You've got talent sweetie.
Thank you for sharinig this with us.
Love you and miss you =(
*Hugs Giulia tight tight tight and never let go of her* =)
Love
Raph
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Date: 2009-11-28 02:37 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-11-28 05:09 pm (UTC)Yes, new icon, I LOVE it, LOL! :) *hugs you back*
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Date: 2010-01-15 07:42 pm (UTC)Jack suffers so much that he lost fear to death. Maybe that's why he didn't take too care about hiding he had a man as a lover, and people could find it and... killed him. Life's unfair.
It's very beautiful writen
Thank you, Giulia
Love and hugs
Marian
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Date: 2010-01-15 08:42 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-01-16 10:40 am (UTC)Jack can not feel rejected, knows it's the only person that has always prevailed in the heart of Ennis del Mar, there's more just him.
Disappointment, disillusionment lies in the kind of life you want and not have ... the "struggle" should not have done so.
Carmen
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Date: 2010-01-16 03:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-01-16 09:46 pm (UTC)that last line is a killer, you know
thanks vanessa
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Date: 2010-01-22 03:15 pm (UTC)