First Impressions
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bowl_of_glowAuthor’s note: Guess this is an answer to Anna's question then! (See, I'm still up! lol). I didn't want to post it today... But I'm so NOT patient. :(
Uhm, yeah. Veeeery silly thing I wrote. I needed something light-hearted. :)
J&E, not so canon-like, but I don’t have any universe to put them in. ;) Only dialogue.
Short as usual... Mistakes mine.
A kiss is a lovely trick designed by nature to stop speech when words become superfluous.
Ingrid Bergman
First impressions
“Ennis?”
“Uh?”
“You know, I was thinking…”
“Mmm. That’s never a good thing.”
“What did you think the first time you saw me?”
“What kinda question is that now?”
“Just gimme an answer, will you?”
*shrug*
“Nothing.”
“Nothing? What the hell does it mean, nothing?”
“Tell me then, what should I have thought?”
“Don’t know.”
*sigh*
“Sometimes I wonder if you do it just to get on my nerves or if you really can’t help being such a pain in the ass.”
“You must have thought something.”
“Nothing you’d like to hear.”
“That’s so, uh? Well, I bet you thought I was good looking... and charming, too...”
“Maybe before you opened your mouth...”
“...and then you must have thought: ‘oh, he’s such a nice guy after all. It’s a real pleasure being around him, I have to admit that’...”
“You sure think a lot of yourself.”
*short pause*
“Wanna know what I thought about you?”
“Not really.”
“See, thought you might be interested.”
*low grunt*
“You didn’t talk too much at first, bud, did you? Too damned tight-lipped to tell me your last name, even. Saving words like they were money. Always acting like the strong, silent type. And I thought, ‘Jeez, he may not talk that much, but he’s a real looker’.”
*pause*
“Aww, you’re blushing.”
“Shut up.”
“Never thought I’d see you blush like that, del Mar.”
“So, that’s all you thought about me?”
“You’re interested, then.”
“You’re gonna tell me anyway, figured I might as well act interested.”
“If you say so.”
*teasing smile*
“You didn’t talk much, but you listened a lot. Never had anyone who cared about what I had to say, only you. And I really liked it. That you wanted to know what I had to say, I mean. That you wanted to know me. For real.”
“So, you were happy ‘cause you had found a new victim you could make giddy with your nonstop talking?”
“Yeah, more or less.”
“You’re such an asshole.”
“Oh, that’s another thing I like about you... You can be so romantic when you want to...”
“Well, you bring out my poetic side.”
“I guess. Come here.”
“Why?”
“You’re all the way over there... Come closer.”
“Here?”
“That’s it. Put your head here. On my shoulder.”
“Mmm.”
“Is a nice feeling, isn’t it?”
“It sure is.”
“You know, Ennis... Never minded if you didn’t talk much. You were exactely all I ever hoped for.”
“And you were exactely what I needed. I guess.”
“You guess?”
“Ah, no, I’m joking. Of course you were. You still are.”
“Really?”
*a deep kiss*
“Guess this was a ‘yes’.”
*chuckle*
“And it was definitely better than thousands of words.”
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...of course thanks if you read it. *hugs*
B
Uhm, yeah. Veeeery silly thing I wrote. I needed something light-hearted. :)
J&E, not so canon-like, but I don’t have any universe to put them in. ;) Only dialogue.
Short as usual... Mistakes mine.
A kiss is a lovely trick designed by nature to stop speech when words become superfluous.
Ingrid Bergman
First impressions
“Ennis?”
“Uh?”
“You know, I was thinking…”
“Mmm. That’s never a good thing.”
“What did you think the first time you saw me?”
“What kinda question is that now?”
“Just gimme an answer, will you?”
*shrug*
“Nothing.”
“Nothing? What the hell does it mean, nothing?”
“Tell me then, what should I have thought?”
“Don’t know.”
*sigh*
“Sometimes I wonder if you do it just to get on my nerves or if you really can’t help being such a pain in the ass.”
“You must have thought something.”
“Nothing you’d like to hear.”
“That’s so, uh? Well, I bet you thought I was good looking... and charming, too...”
“Maybe before you opened your mouth...”
“...and then you must have thought: ‘oh, he’s such a nice guy after all. It’s a real pleasure being around him, I have to admit that’...”
“You sure think a lot of yourself.”
*short pause*
“Wanna know what I thought about you?”
“Not really.”
“See, thought you might be interested.”
*low grunt*
“You didn’t talk too much at first, bud, did you? Too damned tight-lipped to tell me your last name, even. Saving words like they were money. Always acting like the strong, silent type. And I thought, ‘Jeez, he may not talk that much, but he’s a real looker’.”
*pause*
“Aww, you’re blushing.”
“Shut up.”
“Never thought I’d see you blush like that, del Mar.”
“So, that’s all you thought about me?”
“You’re interested, then.”
“You’re gonna tell me anyway, figured I might as well act interested.”
“If you say so.”
*teasing smile*
“You didn’t talk much, but you listened a lot. Never had anyone who cared about what I had to say, only you. And I really liked it. That you wanted to know what I had to say, I mean. That you wanted to know me. For real.”
“So, you were happy ‘cause you had found a new victim you could make giddy with your nonstop talking?”
“Yeah, more or less.”
“You’re such an asshole.”
“Oh, that’s another thing I like about you... You can be so romantic when you want to...”
“Well, you bring out my poetic side.”
“I guess. Come here.”
“Why?”
“You’re all the way over there... Come closer.”
“Here?”
“That’s it. Put your head here. On my shoulder.”
“Mmm.”
“Is a nice feeling, isn’t it?”
“It sure is.”
“You know, Ennis... Never minded if you didn’t talk much. You were exactely all I ever hoped for.”
“And you were exactely what I needed. I guess.”
“You guess?”
“Ah, no, I’m joking. Of course you were. You still are.”
“Really?”
*a deep kiss*
“Guess this was a ‘yes’.”
*chuckle*
“And it was definitely better than thousands of words.”
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...of course thanks if you read it. *hugs*
B
